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She quietly sneaked out of the house, trying not to wake anyone up. She tip-toed down the stairs and gently open the door. The cold night air hit her face, making her shiver. She wrapped her jacket tightly around her.
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She quietly sneaked out of the house, trying not to wake anyone up. She tip-toed down the stairs and gently opened the door. The cold night air hit her face, making her shiver. She wrapped her jacket tightly around herself.